Have spent the day going through the 'comments/edits' of the babes!
Arrrghhh. They are SO GOOD at spotting inconsistencies.
Anyway, I am very glad to have them on my team because I know their suggestions will make the story better but (Tania slams fist into her forehead) I wish I knew that stuff already.
I think it is interesting that they pick the holes I knew were there